Emmanuel's plane left in 10 minutes, I was very sad. He promised he would send me letters. The loud speakers announced the plane is leaving he picked up his bags and I gave him a hug he said he was very glad to stay here, And he was off.
Day 1: surfing...awesome YouTube surf and sound...Bet Kelly dug seeing Emmanuel's attempts Day 2: MC ice cream... what no 10 second rule?...what flavor did you get? Day 3: Beautiful page with fireworks on black...I used to get fireworks at my cousins' house near Sacramento. Day 4: bet he loved the puppy... Day 5: I wonder who was more excited for the visit: Jim or Emmanuel? Day 6: Hearst Castle...gorgeous photo...great visit...awesome dream Day 7: a new bike?!-what a great idea Day 8: a sad departure
Kaleb, I love reading your words. I get to hear your voice and follow your carefully chosen adventures and sharing with Emmanuel. It sounded so real, and I bet Emmanuel enjoyed all the time he got to spend with you. Thanks for making it so real.
Your words are so fun, they deserve one more polish before publishing. Let's find you another set of eyes to go over your words when you're done. 5 minutes of spelling and capitalization polish and your done. Your words already sound awesome. With that polish, they will shred like Kelly on a glassy Rincon day.
Emmanuel's plane left in 10 minutes, I was very sad. He promised he would send me letters. The loud speakers announced the plane is leaving he picked up his bags and I gave him a hug he said he was very glad to stay here, And he was off.
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Day 1: surfing...awesome YouTube surf and sound...Bet Kelly dug seeing Emmanuel's attempts
Day 2: MC ice cream... what no 10 second rule?...what flavor did you get?
Day 3: Beautiful page with fireworks on black...I used to get fireworks at my cousins' house near Sacramento.
Day 4: bet he loved the puppy...
Day 5: I wonder who was more excited for the visit: Jim or Emmanuel?
Day 6: Hearst Castle...gorgeous photo...great visit...awesome dream
Day 7: a new bike?!-what a great idea
Day 8: a sad departure
Kaleb, I love reading your words. I get to hear your voice and follow your carefully chosen adventures and sharing with Emmanuel. It sounded so real, and I bet Emmanuel enjoyed all the time he got to spend with you. Thanks for making it so real.
Your words are so fun, they deserve one more polish before publishing. Let's find you another set of eyes to go over your words when you're done. 5 minutes of spelling and capitalization polish and your done. Your words already sound awesome. With that polish, they will shred like Kelly on a glassy Rincon day.
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